tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post8716733477234725777..comments2023-05-03T17:48:33.085+05:30Comments on Fiesta: The fallacy of an illusionist!: The Chain of LifeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04572433244869890605noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-80867133997907808542011-09-20T19:41:19.957+05:302011-09-20T19:41:19.957+05:30@Arjit Srivastava ya i can understand. i'll su...@Arjit Srivastava ya i can understand. i'll sure improve next tym. thanks a lot for dropping by :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572433244869890605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-80839977050546403602011-09-20T19:31:37.753+05:302011-09-20T19:31:37.753+05:30Wow, seeing you communicate with an anonymous user...Wow, seeing you communicate with an anonymous user, brings so many scary memories back. Those monologues in my head, ah, good old days. Anyway. The post? I think I am going to agree with Mr./Ms. Anonymous; you can certainly write a lot better. Also, try focus on building the plot of the post, too, i.e., they say, the foreplay IS important, and so is the orgasm. :PEr.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11225359974373760374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-90063561999969746952011-06-14T11:23:26.308+05:302011-06-14T11:23:26.308+05:30hehe!! ya!!hehe!! ya!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572433244869890605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-43123549698900347232011-06-13T22:42:21.208+05:302011-06-13T22:42:21.208+05:30omg thats right am not gonna kill you keep writing...omg thats right am not gonna kill you keep writingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-53026418827555474532011-06-13T16:44:44.321+05:302011-06-13T16:44:44.321+05:30hehe!! don't kill me :P if u kill me you cant ...hehe!! don't kill me :P if u kill me you cant read more of my worksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572433244869890605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-79840363986237777542011-06-13T14:26:51.558+05:302011-06-13T14:26:51.558+05:30i am gonna kill you if u dissapoint me grrr:Pi am gonna kill you if u dissapoint me grrr:PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-73734603304070601882011-06-13T10:17:50.802+05:302011-06-13T10:17:50.802+05:30:) danxx m glad u liked it. i am not gonna disappo...:) danxx m glad u liked it. i am not gonna disappoint u!! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572433244869890605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-24677437585663397662011-06-13T01:27:47.225+05:302011-06-13T01:27:47.225+05:30i got second thoughts for this one oh my dear Niy...i got second thoughts for this one oh my dear Niya this one Rockz am a very sensity guy and dis touched my heart i wonder what i was thinking when i wrote the first comment. i cannot believe i underestimated this one this is what u call true love dear fairy tale romance only happens in cinemas and novels gosh i cant wait for u r next workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-71531283247547376482011-06-11T12:34:20.589+05:302011-06-11T12:34:20.589+05:30This is what i m expecting from my readers. Not ju...This is what i m expecting from my readers. Not just praises and compliments but also criticism . As you might know success can never taste better without tasting a little bit of failure first.I am aware of the fact that how much words are imp for a poet. Thank you a lot for your advices & praises. DO keep letting me know. It is the only way to improve..... :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572433244869890605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6352229194656080158.post-42739029034166739542011-06-11T00:29:44.993+05:302011-06-11T00:29:44.993+05:30well it would have been better if u made this one ...well it would have been better if u made this one as an article rather than a poem i am sorry but it didnt have the essential elements or spaces to use poetic elements u can use words which make the read go around the bush and it should always give them a second meaning again am telling u you have tremendous potential and someday u r gonna be great if u use it in the right way for a poet words are like gun if u dont use it correctly it can even kill youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com