Out of the corner of lips
That crooked grin broke out.
The soften lips wide spread
Like a piece of silken carpet.
red vine on the floor.
The white little tooth,
the diamond of queen's crown.
up the face, the eyes
bright and fresh
like the first sunshine after winter..
the sparks in them
brighter than the star's..
and the face, winter's moon.
out of the corner of lips
that crooked grin broke out...
32 comments:
awesum as usual niya
@Moments with you thanks sweetheart :)
i just have one thing to tell u "the 21st century Wordsworth"
incredibly weaved words :)
*Grins* :D
-xoxo
@mystery boy well sweetheart u'r over rating me... anyways thanks for dropping by..
@alcina thank you sweetheart...
*Grins* :D
"the obvious is that ,which is never seen until someone expresses it simply".
keep rokin sys.
@Aman thanks bro i sure will :)
"The white little tooth,
the diamond of queen's crown."
i am impressed with these lines...different concept very nice :)
lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!
@sowmya Thank you swthrt :)
@Kalyan thanks so much!
thanks for dropping by both of you :)
Very nice poem. Powerful words.
dear mine touching this line
i love dear
@Hariharan Valady thank u sir
@dilshad raihan ^_^ thanks for the complement dilshad!
Nice poem and fourth line stands out. Great!!!
@Saru Singhal: thanks a lot saru :)
A new concept, with beautiful knitted words :)
Love, Risha :)
P.S: I don't know why but this image whispered to me that you surely gonna make it in the Criminal Law :)
@Risha Kalra thanks risha :)
love niya :)
P.S i hope that i do :) thanks :)
Mind blowing use of graphic with contextual words.
Good concept..innovative!!
Thank you for sharing.
@Santosh Kumar thank you :) its my pleasure :)
Some soul touching poetry there! :)liked it!
@devangini thanks :)
Well knitted piece and good poetry....liked it....keep going:-)
hey Thank you so much for visiting my Space..em truly honored ...you have a nice page too..following you back:-)
crooked grin! evil! hehe
Wow. Nicely jotted down, niya!
@Nasnin Nasser: thank you :)
@Mishi: thanks a lot mishi. its an honor to have u here :)
@Mr.Jovita: hehe yaya ^_*
@Nostalgic: thank you nostalgic ^_^
nice work :)
Awesome♥
Well-written.
@Treat ur woman right thanks :)
@äмän ♥ thanks a lot♥
@Cynthia thank you
Niya,
Here I am as promised. Read all current posts. Broken show what EGO can do to relationship. Your poems are engrossing. Looking for friend is so realistic. Do keep writing.
Take care
Jack,
thanks a lot jack... I'll sure do ^_^. Thanks for droping by ...
Take care
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