On the silent road
I stand too still,
afraid to move a trifle.
The red tree, lifeless
stands beside me,lonely.
The branches deprived of leafs,
the wind blew them off.
on this twilight
they are as naked as i am.
the moon glowed above us
making us look even more lonely.
somewhere on the branch
a lonely brow leaf
danced with the wind....
then lightly, O so lightly,
descended down upon my feet.
the long stagnant tear
slipped frm my eye. . .
tomorrow the trees will be green,
the sun shining bright.
but today me and the tree is alike
lonely, naked, forgotten...
12 comments:
lovely post Niya :)
awwwwwww......... loved the feelings depicted thru this poem,
"tomorrow the trees will be green,
the sun shining bright.
but today me and the tree is alike
lonely, naked, forgotten...".... i so love this line beautiful ...
p:S - the long stangnent tear ... is it stagnant ???
very nice!
Just awesome play of words:)
loooved it...:-)
Raniyal,
Read 2 posts now. What your friend said is so true. It is we and only WE who need to give a tap to keep fire of our life going. This poems gives state of a sad heart so well comparing it to leafless tree but the tree is covered with leaves again and what about the aching heart?
Take care
PS : Hope I addressed you right or would you prefer Niya?
@ confused soul, @mishi, @saru, @rahul: thanks guys :)
@menachery: glad that u liked :)
p.s: ya tat s wat i ment. it was just a careless mistake sorry for tat :)
@jack: ya i know... n as far as the heart is concerned i hope it will b green again asap i hope :)
take care
P.S: Niya is fine. I prefer that... but Raniyal is not bad... tat s wat my old school mates called me for last 12 years... i was just hoping for a change ^_*
such a lovely song, every word of it was placed so correctly. first thing i see this morning and i feel so nice. keep up.
@Bhanu: glad to know that... i hope i can :)
take care
Niya
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