Silence! silence! silence! silence!
Like a place awaiting violence!
Nothing moved or nothing mewed,
Like they were all doomed...
'Grrrr!' the violence that killed the silence
Over and over the silence...
More movements and more sounds
and they were out in the open Ground.
The bodies burned with fire.
The eyes focused far, reflected the fury.
Nothing moved or nothing mewed,
Like a place awaiting violence!
Nothing moved or nothing mewed,
Like they were all doomed...
'Grrrr!' the violence that killed the silence
Over and over the silence...
More movements and more sounds
and they were out in the open Ground.
The bodies burned with fire.
The eyes focused far, reflected the fury.
Nothing moved or nothing mewed,
Like they were all doomed...
Oh you, people! Look upon their beauty
The beauty of the death deep in their vanity.
But stop! stop and look closer.
Is that hazel depth a reflection of terror!
But what could they fear?,
The powerful brat of soldier!
Oh then the disaster came the way
'Blaa!' the shot flew along the way..
The breath went up! the breath went down!
The breath went up! the breath went down!
Silence! silence! silence! silence!
Like a place after the violence!
4 comments:
I loved this poem of yours....
though it could have been a little better, but it's still a beautiful piece of art.
I had been trying to write such poem for a long time....let's see when it comes up :)
@hemant Even i thought so...
Well all the best for that! waiting to read them :)
i can imagine the picture of each line
wow!u have given great feel nice one!:)
@sowmya thanks :)
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