Adieu tears and adieu pain!
Its time for love and Happiness!
The marks of tears are no more seen,
The smiling face is all you see..
The darken clouds are no more there.
The sun shine, warm and bright..
Sleepless nights are no more around,
Sweet dreams all the way...
The past is gone like a comet,
The future is all bright like a star...
43 comments:
good poem...keep writing!
@nasnin thanks :)
You’re still here in my heart and in my tears.
dear touching
@dilsha thanks :)
u r great
good momentum in the start, but it kinda fades in the end.. may be you could tweak a little bit.. just a thought.. nice write though..
@arjun thanks dear. but i m sure looking out to see urz soon!
@neozrael oh ya i see your point. i'll sure do see to that next time. thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment by the way :)
Umm... It's too perfect a picture.. But yes bright and happy, so I'll digest on this one :)
aJ
btw we both r Pisces :)
Just noticed on your FB batch
@aakash hehe! sometimes picturing perfect makes it happen;)
oh ya gr8! :) Pisces friends then ;)
Touching <3
@äмän ♥ thanks aman :)
i remeber feeling this way wen i finished school.. :)
@jovita hehe!! ya me too :)
what optimism... lovely!!
@metagravity thank you. :)
its more about acceptance and knowing that you are looking forward to more happiness....
more love and happiness your way indeed :)
@Chintan i hope so :) thanks for dropping by :)
niya, you can write to me incase u have any doubts about how to use wordpress
my email id is metaphorandme@gmail.com.. I'll be happy to help!!
BTW Blogger is just great too! :)
@metagravity thanks a lot mi!
And when my joy was born. i held it in my arms and stood on the house- top shouting," come ye . my neighbors, come and see , for joy this day is born unto me.
come and behold this gladsome thing that laugh- eth in the sun" ...!!
astonish the world with ur words.
Aman
@aman thanks for such sweet words aman :)
may you smile all your life :)
@chintan i hope so chintan
നോബരങ്ങളെ മാരോടനക്കുന്ന പ്രണയത്തെ രക്തത്തില് ആവാഹിക്കുന്ന മഹത്തരമായ സ്ര്ഷ്ട്ടിക്കായി കാത്തിരിക്കുന്നു
പ്രിയ സുഹ്ര്ത്തെ നോബരങ്ങളെ പ്രണയിക്കുന്ന എനിക്ക് നിന്നിലെ കവിതകള് വേനലില് പെഴിതോയിഞ്ഞ ഒരു ചാറ്റല് മഴപോലെയാണ്
സസ്നേഹം
Cute and beautiful as well.Keep writing.
Follow each other .
@dilsha i am so glad about that dilsha! so glad..
@♥●• Izdiher·•●♥ thank you
Thank GOD, I read a positive feeling poem here.. :D I was quite tired of reading too mushy and sad poems of late.. the first line is quite a catch :) liked it! :)
@Ananya hehe! i am known for writing mushy and sad poems ;) this is my first positive poem in this blog i blv! glad u like it :)
Great blog - awesome design! Followed!
@D22 Zone thanks a lot swthrt :)
oh sweetie.. I dont detest sad and mushy poems but sometimes My brain becomes immune to them :D :D **too much love will kill you** but do keep posting.. much love to you Niya! :)
Beautiful poem..and thanks a ton cause i needed this picture so much and i couldn't have found it if i hadn't landed on your blog
hugs and kisses to you!
And you have a very sweet blog :)
@Ananya oh sure swthrt :) much love to u too :)
@Alcina glad that i could help u. hugs n kisses to u tooo.... thanks for the complement :)
Very beautifully written....New life...fresh beginnings....full of energy and hope..:)
NIce read :)
@☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ thanks swthrt :)
Oh one of the poems I wrote had the same sweet pic. I like the freshness this poem had within :)
Love, Risha :)
@Risha Kalra: hehe! i'll sure read the post. thanks risha :)
love, niya :)
Ohh Dear Its reallyCraying to LoveVery Nice Blog.....
@pratima giri: Thanks a lot pratima.. :)
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