Saturday, December 10, 2011


As god is my witness
I  stand upon the fire
My feet hurt by them
It burns off my soul....
The anguish cry of my soul
too sharp. . . too piercing...
It hurts my own ear drums!
The doom is upon me. . .!
why, o why, i wounder,
the pandemonium choose me??!!
I curse my karma. but all
that came out is more cries. . .
Help me o help me!
pour out your  mercy!
oh thou most gracious, 
most merciful 
show me a little of your mercy. . .


Jack said...


Feelings of a hurt stated so well.

Take care

PS : This and previous post shows a lot of anguish. Would you like to share it?

Saru Singhal said...

Profound and impressive writing dear...

Anonymous said...

Ani.. Its so nice dear keep doing.. :-)
you dont worry ma dear sis Everything be fine, and my prayers always with u.. Tc..

Bhanu said...

nice poem, with touching n anguish feelings.
keep it up..

Raniyal Niyada said...

@Jack: thanks

Take care

P.S nothing much... maybe i'll share it later in the blog..

@saru: thanks :)

take care

Raniyal Niyada said...

@living: thanks livi. i know u'll b there with me always :)

u too take care

@Bhanu:thanq :)

take care

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