Monday, September 12, 2011

♥Adieu♥

Adieu tears and adieu pain!
Its time for love and Happiness!

The marks of tears are no more seen,
The smiling face is all  you see..

The darken clouds are no more there.
The sun shine, warm and bright..

Sleepless nights are no more around,
Sweet dreams all the way...

The past is gone like a comet,
The future is all bright like a star...


43 comments:

Nasnin Nasser said...

good poem...keep writing!

Niya said...

@nasnin thanks :)

dilsha said...

You’re still here in my heart and in my tears.

dear touching

Niya said...

@dilsha thanks :)

Arjun weired but predicable said...

u r great

neozrael said...

good momentum in the start, but it kinda fades in the end.. may be you could tweak a little bit.. just a thought.. nice write though..

Niya said...

@arjun thanks dear. but i m sure looking out to see urz soon!

Niya said...

@neozrael oh ya i see your point. i'll sure do see to that next time. thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment by the way :)

aakash said...

Umm... It's too perfect a picture.. But yes bright and happy, so I'll digest on this one :)

aJ

aakash said...

btw we both r Pisces :)
Just noticed on your FB batch

Niya said...

@aakash hehe! sometimes picturing perfect makes it happen;)
oh ya gr8! :) Pisces friends then ;)

äмän ♥ said...

Touching <3

Niya said...

@äмän ♥ thanks aman :)

Mr.Jovita said...

i remeber feeling this way wen i finished school.. :)

Niya said...

@jovita hehe!! ya me too :)

metagravity said...

what optimism... lovely!!

Niya said...

@metagravity thank you. :)

Chintan said...

its more about acceptance and knowing that you are looking forward to more happiness....

more love and happiness your way indeed :)

Niya said...

@Chintan i hope so :) thanks for dropping by :)

metagravity said...

niya, you can write to me incase u have any doubts about how to use wordpress
my email id is metaphorandme@gmail.com.. I'll be happy to help!!
BTW Blogger is just great too! :)

Niya said...

@metagravity thanks a lot mi!

Prajil Aman (പ്രജില്‍ അമന്‍) said...

And when my joy was born. i held it in my arms and stood on the house- top shouting," come ye . my neighbors, come and see , for joy this day is born unto me.
come and behold this gladsome thing that laugh- eth in the sun" ...!!

astonish the world with ur words.
Aman

Niya said...

@aman thanks for such sweet words aman :)

Chintan said...
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Chintan said...

may you smile all your life :)

dilshad raihan said...
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Niya said...

@chintan i hope so chintan

dilshad raihan said...

നോബരങ്ങളെ മാരോടനക്കുന്ന പ്രണയത്തെ രക്തത്തില്‍ ആവാഹിക്കുന്ന മഹത്തരമായ സ്ര്ഷ്ട്ടിക്കായി കാത്തിരിക്കുന്നു

പ്രിയ സുഹ്ര്ത്തെ നോബരങ്ങളെ പ്രണയിക്കുന്ന എനിക്ക് നിന്നിലെ കവിതകള്‍ വേനലില്‍ പെഴിതോയിഞ്ഞ ഒരു ചാറ്റല്‍ മഴപോലെയാണ്

സസ്നേഹം

♥●• Izdiher·•●♥ said...

Cute and beautiful as well.Keep writing.

Follow each other .

Niya said...

@dilsha i am so glad about that dilsha! so glad..

@♥●• Izdiher·•●♥ thank you

Ananya said...

Thank GOD, I read a positive feeling poem here.. :D I was quite tired of reading too mushy and sad poems of late.. the first line is quite a catch :) liked it! :)

Niya said...

@Ananya hehe! i am known for writing mushy and sad poems ;) this is my first positive poem in this blog i blv! glad u like it :)

D22 Zone said...

Great blog - awesome design! Followed!

Niya said...

@D22 Zone thanks a lot swthrt :)

Ananya said...

oh sweetie.. I dont detest sad and mushy poems but sometimes My brain becomes immune to them :D :D **too much love will kill you** but do keep posting.. much love to you Niya! :)

Alcina said...

Beautiful poem..and thanks a ton cause i needed this picture so much and i couldn't have found it if i hadn't landed on your blog
hugs and kisses to you!

And you have a very sweet blog :)

Niya said...

@Ananya oh sure swthrt :) much love to u too :)

@Alcina glad that i could help u. hugs n kisses to u tooo.... thanks for the complement :)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Very beautifully written....New life...fresh beginnings....full of energy and hope..:)

NIce read :)

Niya said...

@☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ thanks swthrt :)

Risha Kalra said...

Oh one of the poems I wrote had the same sweet pic. I like the freshness this poem had within :)

Love, Risha :)

Niya said...

@Risha Kalra: hehe! i'll sure read the post. thanks risha :)

love, niya :)

pratima giri said...

Ohh Dear Its reallyCraying to LoveVery Nice Blog.....

Niya said...

@pratima giri: Thanks a lot pratima.. :)

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