Saturday, September 17, 2011

Grin...


Out of the corner of lips
That crooked grin broke out.
The soften lips wide spread
Like a piece of silken carpet.
red vine on the floor.
The white little tooth,
the diamond of queen's crown.
up the face, the eyes 
bright and fresh
like the first sunshine after winter..
the sparks in them 
brighter than the star's..
and the face, winter's moon.  
out of the corner of lips
that crooked grin broke out...



32 comments:

Moments with you said...

awesum as usual niya

Niya said...

@Moments with you thanks sweetheart :)

mystery boy said...

i just have one thing to tell u "the 21st century Wordsworth"

Alcina said...

incredibly weaved words :)

*Grins* :D

-xoxo

Niya said...

@mystery boy well sweetheart u'r over rating me... anyways thanks for dropping by..

@alcina thank you sweetheart...

*Grins* :D

Prajil Aman (പ്രജില്‍ അമന്‍) said...

"the obvious is that ,which is never seen until someone expresses it simply".
keep rokin sys.

Niya said...

@Aman thanks bro i sure will :)

sowmya said...

"The white little tooth,
the diamond of queen's crown."
i am impressed with these lines...different concept very nice :)

Kalyan said...

lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

Niya said...

@sowmya Thank you swthrt :)

@Kalyan thanks so much!

thanks for dropping by both of you :)

Hariharan Valady said...

Very nice poem. Powerful words.

dilshad raihan said...

dear mine touching this line
i love dear

Niya said...

@Hariharan Valady thank u sir

@dilshad raihan ^_^ thanks for the complement dilshad!

Saru Singhal said...

Nice poem and fourth line stands out. Great!!!

Niya said...

@Saru Singhal: thanks a lot saru :)

Risha Kalra said...

A new concept, with beautiful knitted words :)

Love, Risha :)

P.S: I don't know why but this image whispered to me that you surely gonna make it in the Criminal Law :)

Niya said...

@Risha Kalra thanks risha :)

love niya :)

P.S i hope that i do :) thanks :)

Santosh Kumar said...

Mind blowing use of graphic with contextual words.
Good concept..innovative!!

Thank you for sharing.

Niya said...

@Santosh Kumar thank you :) its my pleasure :)

devangini said...

Some soul touching poetry there! :)liked it!

Niya said...

@devangini thanks :)

Nasnin Nasser said...

Well knitted piece and good poetry....liked it....keep going:-)

Mishi said...

hey Thank you so much for visiting my Space..em truly honored ...you have a nice page too..following you back:-)

Mr.Jovita said...

crooked grin! evil! hehe

Nostalgic said...

Wow. Nicely jotted down, niya!

Niya said...

@Nasnin Nasser: thank you :)

@Mishi: thanks a lot mishi. its an honor to have u here :)

@Mr.Jovita: hehe yaya ^_*

@Nostalgic: thank you nostalgic ^_^

Treat ur woman right said...

nice work :)

äмän ♥ said...

Awesome♥

Cynthia said...

Well-written.

Niya said...

@Treat ur woman right thanks :)

@äмän ♥ thanks a lot♥

@Cynthia thank you

Jack said...

Niya,

Here I am as promised. Read all current posts. Broken show what EGO can do to relationship. Your poems are engrossing. Looking for friend is so realistic. Do keep writing.

Take care

Niya said...

Jack,

thanks a lot jack... I'll sure do ^_^. Thanks for droping by ...


Take care

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