Sunday, October 9, 2011

Pinpoints


Pinpoints of light,
Twinkling  before my eyes.
Teasing my vision,
Playing with my senses.
The urge to pull out my hand
And pull it into me..
Like all those tiny pearls.
Lighting the path of my soul..
The darkness of my mind,
Darker than the nights...
Tempted too much, i gave into
But, oh too late, all my illusion!!
Always beyond my reach,
Just like the stars!

22 comments:

aakash said...

it causes pollution, your pinpoints of light :P
nice poem though :)

aJ

Niya said...

@aj :D ya i am aware... but then appreciate beauty when u see it :D and then beauty is always deadly!! :P thanks for dropping by :)

Prajil Aman (പ്രജില്‍ അമന്‍) said...

"The darkness of my mind,
Darker than the nights" ma favorite lines. i loved it. nice one sis keep rockin.

Rahul said...

Any reference to stars inevitably reminds me of that song-
"So all of the stars are fading away,
Try not to worry,u'll see them someday...
Take what you need and just be on ur way!!!!"
:-)
Loved your poem tho..

Mishi said...

cute poem!:-)

Niya said...

@aman: thanks a lot aman! i'll sure do!!

@rahul: :) thanks for dropping by! glad u liked it!!

@Mishi: thanks mishi! :)

confused soul said...

Aaah I look the new look of the blog.. Calm feeling :) .. The poem is sweet.. Glad to see a change :)

Rahul said...

Beautiful poetry!

Nasnin Nasser said...

Such a cute thought written so cutely...like it...good poetry:-)

Leo said...

Wonderful poem that reminds of my own childhood thoughts :) liked it.

Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

Saru Singhal said...

Lovely poem:)

Saru

Niya said...

@confused soul thanks :) ya m glad for the changes too.. :)

@Rahul: thanks :)

@Nasnin Nasser: thanks a lot nasnin

@Leo: thank you :)

@Saru Singhal thank you saru :)

Tarang Sinha said...

This is beautiful:) I liked the "Tiny Pearls"

Niya said...

@Tarang Sinha thanks u... i liked the tiny pearls too :)

Tariq Mian said...

I am follwing you now.
********pinpoints have nicely been blended in poetry.

U R welcome to join my site.

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Lovely poem :)
You have a great blog!

Niya said...

@Tariq Mian thanks a lot for the follow... thanks for the poem.... i'll sure check u'r site too :)


@♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ thanks a lot :)

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Thank you so much for coming by and for following :)
Looking forward to more of your posts :)
Take Care!

Mr.Jovita said...

loved it!

Niya said...

@♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫: its my pleasure :) u too take care :)

@Mr.Jovita : thanks :)

:-Dee said...

Your poem was such a delight a read!!! Beautifully worded... :)

Niya said...

@:-Dee: thanks a lot sweethrt :)

take care
niya

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