Pinpoints of light,
Twinkling before my eyes.
Teasing my vision,
Playing with my senses.
The urge to pull out my hand
And pull it into me..
Like all those tiny pearls.
Lighting the path of my soul..
The darkness of my mind,
Darker than the nights...
Tempted too much, i gave into
But, oh too late, all my illusion!!
Always beyond my reach,
Just like the stars!
22 comments:
it causes pollution, your pinpoints of light :P
nice poem though :)
aJ
@aj :D ya i am aware... but then appreciate beauty when u see it :D and then beauty is always deadly!! :P thanks for dropping by :)
"The darkness of my mind,
Darker than the nights" ma favorite lines. i loved it. nice one sis keep rockin.
Any reference to stars inevitably reminds me of that song-
"So all of the stars are fading away,
Try not to worry,u'll see them someday...
Take what you need and just be on ur way!!!!"
:-)
Loved your poem tho..
cute poem!:-)
@aman: thanks a lot aman! i'll sure do!!
@rahul: :) thanks for dropping by! glad u liked it!!
@Mishi: thanks mishi! :)
Aaah I look the new look of the blog.. Calm feeling :) .. The poem is sweet.. Glad to see a change :)
Beautiful poetry!
Such a cute thought written so cutely...like it...good poetry:-)
Wonderful poem that reminds of my own childhood thoughts :) liked it.
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
Lovely poem:)
Saru
@confused soul thanks :) ya m glad for the changes too.. :)
@Rahul: thanks :)
@Nasnin Nasser: thanks a lot nasnin
@Leo: thank you :)
@Saru Singhal thank you saru :)
This is beautiful:) I liked the "Tiny Pearls"
@Tarang Sinha thanks u... i liked the tiny pearls too :)
I am follwing you now.
********pinpoints have nicely been blended in poetry.
U R welcome to join my site.
Lovely poem :)
You have a great blog!
@Tariq Mian thanks a lot for the follow... thanks for the poem.... i'll sure check u'r site too :)
@♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ thanks a lot :)
Thank you so much for coming by and for following :)
Looking forward to more of your posts :)
Take Care!
loved it!
@♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫: its my pleasure :) u too take care :)
@Mr.Jovita : thanks :)
Your poem was such a delight a read!!! Beautifully worded... :)
@:-Dee: thanks a lot sweethrt :)
take care
niya
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