Sad though the lonely heart....
Sad though the lonely soul...
Sad though the lonely soul...
Happiness poured from the sky
Though not yet reached the eye...
It is easy to pretend the smile
tougher to bring up to mile....
Ask the heart, Ask the mind..
Cruel as the tiger, it betrays the kind.
Go up and Go down, Go up and Go down.
Going on and on but still upside down.
Cold and still as the statue of liberty
is what my heart became less of priority.
Come summer the snow will melt
Come dawn the moon will set
I wounder though for what
to come for me to rest....
4 comments:
u know what i kinda like it i was expecting some kind of lame works but u suprised me u r talented i hope to read more from you
Glad you liked them.. don't hesitate to say what you feel. It is the only way to improve yourself.
ya sure i will i can be a good critique u got great potential keep writing
thank you! :)
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