Saturday, June 18, 2011

Where are my thoughts?

Where are my thought?
I wounder how they slipped!
was it on the person
whom I loved the most?
was it on the person
Whom expired last night?
Was it on the person
who was my best friend?
or was it on the person
who had wounded me the most?
I wounder, lying on the bed of grasses.
Where are my thought?


Maybe it is on the sun,
That shines so bright.
Maybe it is on the moon,
That lightened my nights
Maybe they are on the, 
raindrops dropping down the mat.
Or maybe on the wind,
that is caressing my chest.
I wounder lying on the bed of grass
Where are my thoughts?



18 comments:

Anonymous said...

for every night there is a day for every day der is a night. your thoughts can never die u are an adorable young women who is born to live a great life always remember these words you are only defeated when u decide to be everything happens for a reason a great life is waiting for u if u can still breath that means u can still fight for the best keep fighting fighter......

Niya said...

Thanx!I know that i can fight and i'll fight!

Anonymous said...

great

ഒരു ദുബായിക്കാരന്‍ said...

Good One..Still Searching? Then try try until u get it :-)

Please disable the 'word verification' in your both blogs!

Niya said...

yup! i know :)!

n i hv disabled the 'word verification'

ഒരു ദുബായിക്കാരന്‍ said...

Niya one more suggestion..Please change the background as well. very difficult to read..Put some light color picture.

Niya said...
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Niya said...

@ഒരു ദുബായിക്കാരന്‍ ohhh ohk! i have changed d background! just check out and tell me how it is! and thanks for the suggestion!!!

ഒരു ദുബായിക്കാരന്‍ said...

Its ok now..much better :-)

Niya said...

@ഒരു ദുബായിക്കാരന്‍ glad to know :) do keep giving your suggestions

Kalyani Gupta said...

It's indeed beautiful and mesmerizing :)
Nice read..

Niya said...

@kalyani Gupta thank you :)

JAWHAR SHARIFKK said...

Fantastic..
Superb..
Cant believe ...!
Full vaayichitilla..

Keep writing....
Best of luck..Fantastic..
Superb..
Cant believe ...!
Full vaayichitilla..

Keep writing....
Best of luck..

Niya said...

@jawhar Sharifkk Thank you for the compliments! :) I'll sure keep writing!!

livinfx said...

Nice one niya
keep doing :-)

Niya said...

@livin thankz livin :)

madouthere said...

Really well written....

Niya said...

@madouthere thank u :)

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